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Lovely Luna

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Luna sat on her bed, hooves dangling just an inch above the ground. She was looking up at the moon, dreaming of a better place. She turned and lifted up her journal. Then she wrote.
"I remember. I remember a time when I was free. When no pony controlled me. But now I'm trapped. Alone. Forever. And so every night, I look up at the moon and dream. I dream of when I was free, until I was defeated by that mare. Twilight. I shall break free, and seek revenge. And once she is gone, I can absorb her power and overthrow my sister. Then, I will rule. I shall start tomorrow," Luna wrote in her journal before placing it back on her bed. She turned back to the moon one last time. "Goodnight moon," Luna sighed before laying her head down on the journal and drifting off to sleep.
The next morning, Luna was awake and ready. She grabbed a bag and packed her journal into it. She slung the bag over her back and walked up to her window. She turned and kicked the glass with a kick that would have made Apple Jack jealous. The glass shattered into thousands of shards, spreading all over the garden outside. "Well then, off I go," Luna said to herself, jumping out and flying off.
Luna was about a mile away from Ponyville when she spotted a dark blue pony crying on the ground. Luna flew down and landed next to the crying pony. "Hey, what's wrong?" Luna asked, curious. "Nothing," The blue pony grumbled, a tear falling down her cheek. "Well then, I guess you don't need my help," Luna said, walking off. Luna got about five steps away before the pony started crying again. "My name's Luna. What's yours?" Luna said, turning around to the sad pony. "I am the great and powerful Trixie," The pony said in between sobs. "Well then, what's got you down?" Luna asked, feigning interest. "I'm a screw up," Trixie exclaimed, tears streaming down her face. "That's not true," Luna assured, putting her hoof around Trixie. "Well, I've near caused the entire destruction of Ponville, and now have no house or food," Trixie sobbed, leaning on Luna. "Well, I've nearly destroyed all of Equestria, been trapped in the moon for a thousand years, and ultimately had my powers stripped of me by Twilight Sparkle," Luna chuckled. "Twilight Sparkle! That little pain!" Trixie exclaimed, sitting up. "She banished me from the town," Trixie sobbed. "And everyone said that I was a loudmouthed, annoying bragger," Trixie cried, tears flowing down her face. "Trixie. Look at me," Luna said, looking over at Trixie. Trixie turned towards Luna, so the two were looking into each other's eyes. "You're not worthless. You're not a screw up. You're a sensitive, nice pony, and you should be proud," Luna said, looking straight into Trixie's watery eyes. There was a moment of silence. The next thing Luna knew, Trixie was kissing her. "Thank you," Trixie whispered, letting Luna breathe. "No. Thank you. Now I have a friend, the first one in over a thousand years. Thank you, Trixie," Luna whispered back. Trixie nodded and the two locked lips.
A short My Little Pony Fanfiction I wrote up during an all-nighter. I just thought I'd share it. Somewhat inspired by this picture: [link]

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Now if this isn't the fastest paced story ever ;P

Nice bit, evil Luna isn't so bad afterall xD

Still prefer happy Luna ;P